Comments for Phantasia http://www.phantasiaonline.com Mon, 08 Mar 2010 19:06:43 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9 hourly 1 Comment on Chapter 1: Phantasia Celeste by Dary http://www.phantasiaonline.com/story/chapter-1-4/comment-page-1#comment-995 Dary Mon, 08 Mar 2010 19:06:43 +0000 http://www.phantasiaonline.com/?page_id=98#comment-995 Don't worry, I have these commenty bits at the bottom of every page so people <em>can</em> point these things out XD Don’t worry, I have these commenty bits at the bottom of every page so people can point these things out XD

]]> Comment on Chapter 1: Phantasia Celeste by Joe http://www.phantasiaonline.com/story/chapter-1-4/comment-page-1#comment-994 Joe Mon, 08 Mar 2010 17:25:47 +0000 http://www.phantasiaonline.com/?page_id=98#comment-994 After some further thought... dived is correct as well. I always just thought dive as a regular verb was silly, and both are commonly accepted. Apologies for the unwarranted correction. After some further thought… dived is correct as well. I always just thought dive as a regular verb was silly, and both are commonly accepted.

Apologies for the unwarranted correction.

]]> Comment on Chapter 1: Phantasia Celeste by Joe http://www.phantasiaonline.com/story/chapter-1-4/comment-page-1#comment-993 Joe Mon, 08 Mar 2010 17:13:25 +0000 http://www.phantasiaonline.com/?page_id=98#comment-993 "The fire faeries dived towards the lower planes, charging into battle with their characteristic passion and pride." I believe it would be: "The fire faeries *dove*.." I just discovered your work... I'm enjoying it. Sorry for being the grammar police. “The fire faeries dived towards the lower planes, charging into battle with their characteristic passion and pride.”

I believe it would be: “The fire faeries *dove*..”

I just discovered your work… I’m enjoying it. Sorry for being the grammar police.

]]> Comment on Chapter 52: Disruption by Dary http://www.phantasiaonline.com/story/52-6/comment-page-1#comment-992 Dary Sun, 07 Mar 2010 20:05:52 +0000 http://www.phantasiaonline.com/?page_id=6111#comment-992 Joel certainly has his own overarching story (like most of the characters). Can't really say much more other than his constant failing to do much of use will start to have an effect... Joel certainly has his own overarching story (like most of the characters). Can’t really say much more other than his constant failing to do much of use will start to have an effect…

]]> Comment on Chapter 52: Disruption by Its Me Again http://www.phantasiaonline.com/story/52-6/comment-page-1#comment-991 Its Me Again Sun, 07 Mar 2010 19:50:27 +0000 http://www.phantasiaonline.com/?page_id=6111#comment-991 I'm still pulling for Joel, there is still something brewing under the surface with him. I think it may be a spectacular show when (if?) it does happen. Or maybe I just have a weakness for the underdog... hmmms. I’m still pulling for Joel, there is still something brewing under the surface with him. I think it may be a spectacular show when (if?) it does happen. Or maybe I just have a weakness for the underdog… hmmms.

]]> Comment on Chapter 52: Disruption by Dary http://www.phantasiaonline.com/story/52-6/comment-page-1#comment-989 Dary Fri, 05 Mar 2010 20:24:45 +0000 http://www.phantasiaonline.com/?page_id=6111#comment-989 The guitarblade would be made out some kind of crazyawesome nanomaterial that's both light and tough. It was given to him by Kaori's father, who would have the contacts to acquire such things. The grapple will, like a lot of advanced firearms, use magnets. Or something. The 'rope' would be some kind of adaptable material, it can be as strong as a chain or elastic like a bungie cord - its length would be dependant on its form (since it would have to retain the same physical mass). The actual hook would use some form of simple nano-tech and have systems designed to latch on to most surfaces (it would adapt itself to whatever it strikes). John's tech isn't the height of advancement by any means, though. He's using stuff developed perhaps hundreds of years ago. I try not to worry too much about scientific accuracy. It's the 31st century, trying to predict what it would REALLY be like would be akin to vikings contemplating quantum mechanics XD The guitarblade would be made out some kind of crazyawesome nanomaterial that’s both light and tough. It was given to him by Kaori’s father, who would have the contacts to acquire such things.

The grapple will, like a lot of advanced firearms, use magnets. Or something. The ‘rope’ would be some kind of adaptable material, it can be as strong as a chain or elastic like a bungie cord – its length would be dependant on its form (since it would have to retain the same physical mass). The actual hook would use some form of simple nano-tech and have systems designed to latch on to most surfaces (it would adapt itself to whatever it strikes). John’s tech isn’t the height of advancement by any means, though. He’s using stuff developed perhaps hundreds of years ago.

I try not to worry too much about scientific accuracy. It’s the 31st century, trying to predict what it would REALLY be like would be akin to vikings contemplating quantum mechanics XD

]]> Comment on Chapter 52: Disruption by Viral Enigma http://www.phantasiaonline.com/story/52-6/comment-page-1#comment-988 Viral Enigma Fri, 05 Mar 2010 16:35:55 +0000 http://www.phantasiaonline.com/?page_id=6111#comment-988 I thought it interesting that Joel's complaining caused something akin to an emotional outburst from Faye. When he was complaining about having to sit around and wait for Theseus, Faye more or less told him that dead weight should be seen and not heard if that, even. <i>My</i> summary, anyway. Although now I'm kinda curious about the material his RagnaRock(lol) is made out of because he smashed it against a hard crystalline surface with enough force to cause it to smash against a wall into stardust. Does John's grapple-hook device use nano machines for the rope and the spear head of the grapple and just how far can it be shot or does it have a minor rocket boost for longer distances? I thought it interesting that Joel’s complaining caused something akin to an emotional outburst from Faye. When he was complaining about having to sit around and wait for Theseus, Faye more or less told him that dead weight should be seen and not heard if that, even. My summary, anyway. Although now I’m kinda curious about the material his RagnaRock(lol) is made out of because he smashed it against a hard crystalline surface with enough force to cause it to smash against a wall into stardust.
Does John’s grapple-hook device use nano machines for the rope and the spear head of the grapple and just how far can it be shot or does it have a minor rocket boost for longer distances?

]]> Comment on Chapter 52: Disruption by Thom http://www.phantasiaonline.com/story/52-1/comment-page-1#comment-987 Thom Fri, 05 Mar 2010 15:34:28 +0000 http://www.phantasiaonline.com/?page_id=6106#comment-987 "A tall story, certainly, and one Katrina would never have brought a year or two ago," should be bought. You'll thank us in the long run for the minor edits ;) “A tall story, certainly, and one Katrina would never have brought a year or two ago,”
should be bought.

You’ll thank us in the long run for the minor edits ;)

]]> Comment on Chapter 52: Disruption by Tellur http://www.phantasiaonline.com/story/52-6/comment-page-1#comment-986 Tellur Fri, 05 Mar 2010 13:46:09 +0000 http://www.phantasiaonline.com/?page_id=6111#comment-986 Good chapter! Theseus and John get to show of again. Faye gets a little remainder she may not be completely in control of every situation involving the humans. Sadly the newspaper girls don't get to do anything yet but their time will come! I liked Joel's fit of rage. And I think everyone in that party (aside from his girlfriend) will be extremely annoyed by him. I just wait till Theseus snaps the Guitar-thingy and snaps it in half or something like that :D Good chapter!
Theseus and John get to show of again. Faye gets a little remainder she may not be completely in control of every situation involving the humans. Sadly the newspaper girls don’t get to do anything yet but their time will come!
I liked Joel’s fit of rage. And I think everyone in that party (aside from his girlfriend) will be extremely annoyed by him. I just wait till Theseus snaps the Guitar-thingy and snaps it in half or something like that :D

]]> Comment on Chapter 49: The Gauntlet by Lilithmae http://www.phantasiaonline.com/story/49-3/comment-page-1#comment-985 Lilithmae Fri, 05 Mar 2010 12:11:38 +0000 http://www.phantasiaonline.com/?page_id=5636#comment-985 Maybe 'alone' should instead be 'along'? Maybe ‘alone’ should instead be ‘along’?

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