Comments on: 1: Phantasia Celeste http://www.phantasiaonline.com Tue, 07 Feb 2012 01:22:36 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Dary http://www.phantasiaonline.com/story/chapter-1-4/comment-page-1#comment-995 Dary Mon, 08 Mar 2010 19:06:43 +0000 http://www.phantasiaonline.com/?page_id=98#comment-995 Don't worry, I have these commenty bits at the bottom of every page so people <em>can</em> point these things out XD Don’t worry, I have these commenty bits at the bottom of every page so people can point these things out XD

]]> By: Joe http://www.phantasiaonline.com/story/chapter-1-4/comment-page-1#comment-994 Joe Mon, 08 Mar 2010 17:25:47 +0000 http://www.phantasiaonline.com/?page_id=98#comment-994 After some further thought... dived is correct as well. I always just thought dive as a regular verb was silly, and both are commonly accepted. Apologies for the unwarranted correction. After some further thought… dived is correct as well. I always just thought dive as a regular verb was silly, and both are commonly accepted.

Apologies for the unwarranted correction.

]]> By: Joe http://www.phantasiaonline.com/story/chapter-1-4/comment-page-1#comment-993 Joe Mon, 08 Mar 2010 17:13:25 +0000 http://www.phantasiaonline.com/?page_id=98#comment-993 "The fire faeries dived towards the lower planes, charging into battle with their characteristic passion and pride." I believe it would be: "The fire faeries *dove*.." I just discovered your work... I'm enjoying it. Sorry for being the grammar police. “The fire faeries dived towards the lower planes, charging into battle with their characteristic passion and pride.”

I believe it would be: “The fire faeries *dove*..”

I just discovered your work… I’m enjoying it. Sorry for being the grammar police.

]]> By: elyë http://www.phantasiaonline.com/story/chapter-1-4/comment-page-1#comment-612 elyë Thu, 28 Jan 2010 17:17:36 +0000 http://www.phantasiaonline.com/?page_id=98#comment-612 I'm not sure, but I've got a feeling that there's a slight slip in the last sentence. it says: "without a genius like Nereus to control them, the demons were easily outclassed" Should it not be "with" instead of "without"? Altough I might've misunderstood the whole thing, as english isn't my mother tongue... if that's the case, I apologize for disturbing with idiotic comments. :D (btw, you've got a new reader out of me, and I intend to read this whole story and keep reading it regularly once I've caught up with your update pace) Nice work, it seems this far! I’m not sure, but I’ve got a feeling that there’s a slight slip in the last sentence. it says: “without a genius like Nereus to control them, the demons were easily outclassed” Should it not be “with” instead of “without”? Altough I might’ve misunderstood the whole thing, as english isn’t my mother tongue… if that’s the case, I apologize for disturbing with idiotic comments. :D
(btw, you’ve got a new reader out of me, and I intend to read this whole story and keep reading it regularly once I’ve caught up with your update pace) Nice work, it seems this far!

]]> By: Anonymous http://www.phantasiaonline.com/story/chapter-1-4/comment-page-1#comment-297 Anonymous Wed, 16 Dec 2009 22:34:11 +0000 http://www.phantasiaonline.com/?page_id=98#comment-297 Paragraph two: "the same statement for a while new." New=now. Paragraph two: “the same statement for a while new.” New=now.

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