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	<title>Comments on: 29: Secrets of the Church</title>
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		<title>By: Dary</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Dec 2009 02:49:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well if you see a cricket ball show up in future, you&#039;ll know it&#039;s because you pointed it out in the first place!!</description>
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		<title>By: Koli</title>
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		<dc:creator>Koli</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Dec 2009 09:50:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That&#039;s all, eh? I kinda hoped it would make it&#039;s way back into the story in some minor way or something. Oh well, I guess it wasn&#039;t all that important anyhow.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s all, eh? I kinda hoped it would make it&#8217;s way back into the story in some minor way or something. Oh well, I guess it wasn&#8217;t all that important anyhow.</p>
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		<title>By: Dary</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Dec 2009 12:12:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The cricket ball? I imagine Horatio was observant (and OCD) enough to notice it wherever it&#039;d settled and reclaimed it!</description>
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		<title>By: Koli</title>
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		<dc:creator>Koli</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Dec 2009 09:13:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Out of curiosity, what happened to the ball?</description>
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		<title>By: Dary</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Oct 2009 22:52:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This chapter never appeared in earlier drafts!

Not much I can think of to say, really :P Hermia and Horatio were drafted into this as side-characters with little to do, but when writing I realised how I could work some of their back story into things. This proves knowing your characters well and knowing where the story is going can be beneficial XD Then again, you should never plan things out too much, because characters can sometimes take over and derail those plans XD (serious business writers say you shouldn&#039;t let that happen - I ignore them)

Just don&#039;t be expecting H&amp;H to get the spotlight for a while yet :o

There aren&#039;t any clever references or names in this chapter, so no geeky James May facts I&#039;m afraid. I wrote the bulk of it at the weekend, actually, as I&#039;d found it difficult before and skipped ahead (I&#039;m writing #34 at the moment!). The added characterisation for H&amp;H helped inspire me quite a bit! I admit to having some difficulty writing a very feminine group, especially since it&#039;s been focal for two chapters now. Sometimes I worried that Hermia was turning into the love child of Phoenie and Theseus, possessing the first&#039;s power-lust and the second&#039;s cynicism. But then I thought &quot;that&#039;s life, isn&#039;t it?&quot; - people do tend to be a mix of certain elements and personality traits and sometimes it&#039;s something as simple as a lifestyle choice or subculture allegiance that separates them.

The next arc was a lot easier to write, but that&#039;s because it&#039;s based around Veritas and they&#039;re dead easy to write for!</description>
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<p>Not much I can think of to say, really <img src='http://www.phantasiaonline.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif' alt=':P' class='wp-smiley' />  Hermia and Horatio were drafted into this as side-characters with little to do, but when writing I realised how I could work some of their back story into things. This proves knowing your characters well and knowing where the story is going can be beneficial XD Then again, you should never plan things out too much, because characters can sometimes take over and derail those plans XD (serious business writers say you shouldn&#8217;t let that happen &#8211; I ignore them)</p>
<p>Just don&#8217;t be expecting H&#038;H to get the spotlight for a while yet <img src='http://www.phantasiaonline.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_surprised.gif' alt=':o' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>There aren&#8217;t any clever references or names in this chapter, so no geeky James May facts I&#8217;m afraid. I wrote the bulk of it at the weekend, actually, as I&#8217;d found it difficult before and skipped ahead (I&#8217;m writing #34 at the moment!). The added characterisation for H&#038;H helped inspire me quite a bit! I admit to having some difficulty writing a very feminine group, especially since it&#8217;s been focal for two chapters now. Sometimes I worried that Hermia was turning into the love child of Phoenie and Theseus, possessing the first&#8217;s power-lust and the second&#8217;s cynicism. But then I thought &#8220;that&#8217;s life, isn&#8217;t it?&#8221; &#8211; people do tend to be a mix of certain elements and personality traits and sometimes it&#8217;s something as simple as a lifestyle choice or subculture allegiance that separates them.</p>
<p>The next arc was a lot easier to write, but that&#8217;s because it&#8217;s based around Veritas and they&#8217;re dead easy to write for!</p>
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