Comments on: 38: First Meeting http://www.phantasiaonline.com Tue, 07 Feb 2012 01:22:36 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Fuuren http://www.phantasiaonline.com/story/chapter-38-6/comment-page-1#comment-942 Fuuren Sat, 20 Feb 2010 21:27:17 +0000 http://www.phantasiaonline.com/?page_id=3968#comment-942 Shouldn't: "As they stepped onto the shore of the temple the Shades can scampering out to confront them, some almost as tall as Faye herself." Be: "As they stepped onto the shore of the temple the Shades came scampering out to confront them, some almost as tall as Faye herself." Instead? The word 'can' doesn't make sense in that context. Shouldn’t:
“As they stepped onto the shore of the temple the Shades can scampering out to confront them, some almost as tall as Faye herself.”
Be:
“As they stepped onto the shore of the temple the Shades came scampering out to confront them, some almost as tall as Faye herself.”
Instead?

The word ‘can’ doesn’t make sense in that context.

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